Every fairy in the world knew that nobody was allowed to sing. Everybody but one fairy. She was a shy little girl who loved to sing. She had a beautiful voice. She never sang in public until one day she did. When the crowd heard her voice they were locked into a beautiful vision of the singing fairy. The crowd went over to the president's house and opened the door. They stormed over to his office, barged through the door and started talking to the president. They demanded the law to be changed. One person in the crowd had recorded the performance. They showed it to the president. The president thought that it was the most beautiful song he had ever heard.
After that day all fairies were allowed to sing.
Great work Noemi! I really loved this story and I think it had a great ending. I think that this is the type of story that has a message. Even if you did make a moral it wasn't very clear. I think it was unrealistic (not that unrealistic is bad) how the crowd would dare to barge in like that! I didn't seem right to me. Also, in my opinion you used the word president too much. I liked that you never really told any names so it was like a suspicious story which I liked a lot. I think the length was perfect. Keep up the great work!
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